Time was a decent wee story, apart from the odd little niggle style wise I enjoyed it.
There was two blank pages between the chapters which tricked me into believing it had finished. I initially thought, before realising there was more, that it ended at chapter one and I really liked the ending. Don't get me wrong, I liked it with the extra chapters too, and it was still a good read, but if I was to choose between the shorter version and the longer version, I would choose the shorter one as I feel it could stand on it's own as a really nice strong short.
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